mid-day update
Jan. 28th, 2009 12:35 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
lauraanne_gilmanPart II is done.
(and mam'selle editrix was right, everything in that scene that was important could be moved to a different scene, and that pared away excess verbiage nicely. Damn it. Also: lovely typo: tiny freen puds instead of tiny green buds.)
I have also filled two single-spaced pages with terms and names for the copy-editor's use. Pity the poor copy-editor on this one...
Taking a break to put away the rest of the grocery delivery, and then maybe a nap. Part III is on-notice.
(and mam'selle editrix was right, everything in that scene that was important could be moved to a different scene, and that pared away excess verbiage nicely. Damn it. Also: lovely typo: tiny freen puds instead of tiny green buds.)
I have also filled two single-spaced pages with terms and names for the copy-editor's use. Pity the poor copy-editor on this one...
Taking a break to put away the rest of the grocery delivery, and then maybe a nap. Part III is on-notice.
